Leona is the one with the green outfit, the other is new girl, no not his sister, she is her friend and also her maid. That's all I can tell about her now ^_^
So this story explain also why Lucian was Lena and her sister so badly, is that right? nice Pictures!, and what I can see von the new maid looks nice! It looks like that Lucian was from the beginning a Bad guy!
It's this part of the story that makes it so useful to release this comic before Gaia 6. There was still so much to tell about everything that happened in the past in the elf community.
If we had put these scenes in Gaia 6, they would have become shorter and in the form of flashbacks that would only hinder the storytelling about the action in the present time. In this comic, we can give these scenes the attention they deserve.
I have a suggestion G9. Since so many people were upset that Laura was corrupted off screen in Gaia 5. Wouldn't it be a good idea, as an epilogue to SH0, to show that turning? I'm no big fan of Elves myself, but since many of your other fans seem to like them, and got pissed when they missed that scen, it could be nice to see it.
It depends... How much money will you pay us? You know...lately I spent lots of money just to rent lots of elephants, paint them pink, and train them to dance can-can... hahahaha...
Wait, I showed Lucian corrupted her, right? In Gaia 4? when Laura took a bath?
Kain refers to the corruption that took place off-screen in Gaia 5 when Lucian handed her over to the D.E.
I don't see how such an epilogue would make sense in SR0 though. It would be a completely unrelated bonus scene. The idea is nice but is possibly better left for one of the remaining Gaia issues.
@G9 Since im no fan of Elves you won't get my money xP But im not supprised that Mp:s fetishes is draining the budget. Maybe we should do some kind of intervention for him xD Helping him, to stop with his sinful perversions.
@Mp I think it would be possible to get it to work as an epilogue. It would, of course, work in Gaia 6 in a scene where maybe Laura is telling what happened. Or something like that.
The whole SR0 issue was designed to be the chronological first issue of the entire Rangers series. You don't need to have read any of the other comics or have any knowledge of the series whatsoever to understand everything that happens.
That's the main reason why an epilogue that shows a "hidden" scene from Gaia 5, which is the 12th(!) comic in the series (13th if we count SR0 as the first), doesn't fit in the very first comic.
It should be possible to read every comic in order without bumping in an epilogue that doesn't make sense until much, much later.
I'm afraid the scene won't add "much" details to the story if we put that (DE corrupt Laura) as an epilogue or something. For fan service, maybe. So I think I'll pass on that. If there are some time, maybe I'll make that scene only for fan service (not on SR or Gaia 6) I can put it here. It won't be long tho' maybe just 5 pages? I won't promise anything on that, haha...
picture 2 (be the update10.6) looks like W. that is the scientist. So he was at the beginning the real evil man behind of all this evil! And the Black man on in the update 10/19/2013( the dark Emperor ) is in the end just a victim of his evil science? But it is interesting that Magen has now the same power as the dark Emperor maybe she give it to the "new" dark Emperor or she is a second Power in the Future or maybe the power behind Luian or a third Power for her own! Am I good with some of this presumptions:) You can give a short antwort and than you can delete this comment! we don´t want to give to much released :)
Hello G9, Mpgrey, I'm using a short window of time that I have to post a small ,but as always pertinent, comment. (Yeah, I know, I'm modest) I'm guessing that SR0 is going well seeing the great number of uploads about it. At least you seem motivated and that's a good thing. The art looks good so far. I like the fact that the characters are easy to differentiate from each other: Megan doesn't look like Alayeh nor do either of them look like Leona. Good... I guess :p
Storywise, just think about doing good character development and don't forget you can do both character development AND corruption at the same time.
Finally, I read again most of the Rangers' comics and came upon the fact that there is sometime a big lack of dialogue. The art is top notch but the dialogues (especially during corruption) could be a lot bigger. It would help us understand with more ease what's happening during this time and the comic would seem more fleshed out and not as short. It was something that bothered me for quite a while and I think I've put my finger on it.
I've seen that you've started a "page" for the Violet NTR story. I think it's a great idea personally. This way G9, you can do something a bit different from basic corruption comics and it's a good exercise also. Whatever one thinks of NTR, It can be very good to represent the change of mind of the heroine without too much relying on supernatural elements or various magical drugs. It mostly falls on the shoulders of the villain and his smarts. And I prefer that, as it allows us to understand how and why the heroine "falls" in the end.
Okay I guess that was short. (For me anyway) You have my encouragement for all your future endeavor !
do we know, one of this girls? was one the young Leona? in the green dress was that Leona? how was the elf in the white dress maybe a third sister?
ReplyDeleteLeona is the one with the green outfit, the other is new girl, no not his sister, she is her friend and also her maid.
DeleteThat's all I can tell about her now ^_^
So this story explain also why Lucian was Lena and her sister so badly, is that right? nice Pictures!, and what I can see von the new maid looks nice!
ReplyDeleteIt looks like that Lucian was from the beginning a Bad guy!
It's this part of the story that makes it so useful to release this comic before Gaia 6. There was still so much to tell about everything that happened in the past in the elf community.
DeleteIf we had put these scenes in Gaia 6, they would have become shorter and in the form of flashbacks that would only hinder the storytelling about the action in the present time.
In this comic, we can give these scenes the attention they deserve.
ah man i hope for some g9 corruption soon... been so long and im such a fan!!!
ReplyDeleteThank You.
DeleteI'll try to put as much as I can.
I have a suggestion G9. Since so many people were upset that Laura was corrupted off screen in Gaia 5. Wouldn't it be a good idea, as an epilogue to SH0, to show that turning? I'm no big fan of Elves myself, but since many of your other fans seem to like them, and got pissed when they missed that scen, it could be nice to see it.
ReplyDeleteIt depends...
DeleteHow much money will you pay us? You know...lately I spent lots of money just to rent lots of elephants, paint them pink, and train them to dance can-can... hahahaha...
Wait, I showed Lucian corrupted her, right? In Gaia 4? when Laura took a bath?
Kain refers to the corruption that took place off-screen in Gaia 5 when Lucian handed her over to the D.E.
DeleteI don't see how such an epilogue would make sense in SR0 though. It would be a completely unrelated bonus scene.
The idea is nice but is possibly better left for one of the remaining Gaia issues.
@G9 Since im no fan of Elves you won't get my money xP But im not supprised that Mp:s fetishes is draining the budget. Maybe we should do some kind of intervention for him xD Helping him, to stop with his sinful perversions.
Delete@Mp I think it would be possible to get it to work as an epilogue. It would, of course, work in Gaia 6 in a scene where maybe Laura is telling what happened. Or something like that.
The whole SR0 issue was designed to be the chronological first issue of the entire Rangers series. You don't need to have read any of the other comics or have any knowledge of the series whatsoever to understand everything that happens.
DeleteThat's the main reason why an epilogue that shows a "hidden" scene from Gaia 5, which is the 12th(!) comic in the series (13th if we count SR0 as the first), doesn't fit in the very first comic.
It should be possible to read every comic in order without bumping in an epilogue that doesn't make sense until much, much later.
@Mp, I'm using my Jedi mind trick here. This is the epilogue you are looking for.
DeleteI'm afraid the scene won't add "much" details to the story if we put that (DE corrupt Laura) as an epilogue or something.
DeleteFor fan service, maybe.
So I think I'll pass on that.
If there are some time, maybe I'll make that scene only for fan service (not on SR or Gaia 6)
I can put it here. It won't be long tho' maybe just 5 pages?
I won't promise anything on that, haha...
had this dark place with the gate a Important meaning for this story and for the Future of the Story?
ReplyDeleteQuite important.
DeleteImportant indeed, it leads to the place where Aragorn, Legolas and Gimli will find the army they need to aid Minas Tirith.
DeleteThere are other new elf women beside this 3 elf woman?
ReplyDeleteps. by the next update, you can show us the face of the new elf!
or is it a surprise for us?
Only 3.
DeleteIt's for surprise ^_^ (But she is cute IMO, ^_^)
picture 2 (be the update10.6) looks like W. that is the scientist.
ReplyDeleteSo he was at the beginning the real evil man behind of all this evil! And the Black man on in the update 10/19/2013( the dark Emperor ) is in the end just a victim of his evil science?
But it is interesting that Magen has now the same power as the dark Emperor maybe she give it to the "new" dark Emperor or she is a second Power in the Future or maybe the power behind Luian or a third Power for her own!
Am I good with some of this presumptions:)
You can give a short antwort and than you can delete this comment! we don´t want to give to much released :)
Nice try buddy! But you'll have to wait just like everyone else! >_<
DeleteHello G9, Mpgrey,
ReplyDeleteI'm using a short window of time that I have to post a small ,but as always pertinent, comment.
(Yeah, I know, I'm modest)
I'm guessing that SR0 is going well seeing the great number of uploads about it. At least you seem motivated and that's a good thing.
The art looks good so far. I like the fact that the characters are easy to differentiate from each other: Megan doesn't look like Alayeh nor do either of them look like Leona. Good... I guess :p
Storywise, just think about doing good character development and don't forget you can do both character development AND corruption at the same time.
Finally, I read again most of the Rangers' comics and came upon the fact that there is sometime a big lack of dialogue. The art is top notch but the dialogues (especially during corruption) could be a lot bigger. It would help us understand with more ease what's happening during this time and the comic would seem more fleshed out and not as short. It was something that bothered me for quite a while and I think I've put my finger on it.
I've seen that you've started a "page" for the Violet NTR story. I think it's a great idea personally. This way G9, you can do something a bit different from basic corruption comics and it's a good exercise also. Whatever one thinks of NTR, It can be very good to represent the change of mind of the heroine without too much relying on supernatural elements or various magical drugs. It mostly falls on the shoulders of the villain and his smarts. And I prefer that, as it allows us to understand how and why the heroine "falls" in the end.
Okay I guess that was short. (For me anyway)
You have my encouragement for all your future endeavor !
Welcome back, HoC!
DeleteThanks for pointing out shortcomings and helping us to make the comics better.
There should be an e-mail on your digital doormat by now.
now you almost in the center of your story! it was a long way!:)
ReplyDeleteup to this point of the the story, how many people was be corrupt more than 3?
Oh come on, you don't really want that spoiled, do you? Where is the fun in knowing everything in advance?
Deletehas the new elf a big importance for the future? is she older than Leona?
ReplyDeleteMaybe a halloween update of one of your project? one Picture is enough:)
ReplyDeletehave a nice day