Need your help...
My friend told me that the new Amy (the "Megan Fox" version) is look too strong for someone who is corrupted first.
So I change her appearance a bit.
What do you think?
I made her a lil bit young this time (same age as Pink I think)
Of course she is not as naive as Kate, but not as strong as the others.
And, if I change the original plot a little bit, is it OK?
some major change is, how Amy is corrupted. On the original she was corrupted (easily) by Al, but when the story goes, she was (again) corrupted by the Dark Emperror, and once again by the tube by B (again... >_<)
So who do you think is the best to corrupt her?
So I change her appearance a bit.
What do you think?
I made her a lil bit young this time (same age as Pink I think)
Of course she is not as naive as Kate, but not as strong as the others.
And, if I change the original plot a little bit, is it OK?
some major change is, how Amy is corrupted. On the original she was corrupted (easily) by Al, but when the story goes, she was (again) corrupted by the Dark Emperror, and once again by the tube by B (again... >_<)
So who do you think is the best to corrupt her?
Dark Emperror should corrupt her
ReplyDeleteI like the new look but I do admit to liking her old hair better, seemed more in the style of a good guy.
ReplyDeleteThe Dark Emperor should seal the deal on the corruptions.
OK, so the old hair is better.
DeleteAny more suggestions?
And it seems the Dark Emperor should corrupt her in the first place.
Al could just entrance her, and the Dark Emperor could corrupt her
ReplyDeleteG9 i think it's fine to keep it like that as there are many different levels of corruption so Al can be the initial, dark emperor-level 2 and the tube will completely corrupt her whereby her final corrupted look is shown from then on
ReplyDeletePersonally, I see no reason to adjust the character's looks based on the order of corruption. It's like you're trying to say that looking tough makes one tough. In the old story, Amy is taken by surprise and I don't see how tougher looks would hinder that process.
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't want to compare the main characters in your future comics, order them based on their toughness, and know which events will take place in which order.
In short, I don't agree with that friend of yours! >_<
Also, I think her face doesn't look different enough from Kate's face. I vote for changing her back....but that's just me.
That said, it's fully okay to change the plot as much as you want. After all, it's your opportunity to re-do the entire thing and change whatever you weren't fully satisfied with in the end.
I'd welcome a change in the speed of her corruption. It was just about the very first thing that happened in the original (reader sees girl, reader sees girl and enemy, girl already lost to enemy, reader knows absolutely nothing about girl). I'd like more building up to that event.
i prefer the megan fox look. Maybe you can start with this inocent young girl and then trought the tube transformation she get a more strong mature look ( megan fox look).
ReplyDeletei think that amy has to be special cause she was the first.
And i would love AL make the entracement and the emperor the corruption and the tube the fisical transformation :)
megan fox look lot better and the corruption order al,emperor,tube
ReplyDeleteI'm definetely for the Megan Fox look
ReplyDeleteshe roxxx
I prefer the Megan Fox Amy as well. The new look is just... not like Amy at all. I think the evolution is more evident in that version of her.
ReplyDeleteAlso, her corruption was really well done, she doesn't have to be younger or more naive if she's ambushed in some way.
Megan Fox is better imo , maybe she will be ambushed by some monster/fat ugly man etc. ? :P
ReplyDeleteany updates on the next gaia / shinra's fallen star chapter?
ReplyDeleteonly 30% rendered for Fallen Star chap 5 :-/
ReplyDeleteLet Al be the original captor and then allow the Dark King to be the corruptor/brainwasher. You might want to have Al's involvement wth Yellow stop at the pool with minimum sex. B should be told to use the tank for the last part of the process in that it will be used later in the story.
ReplyDeletePlease keep Yellow's slave garments - they are among the hottest things you've drawn.